This is Blitza Aleshipper Airflyer's Critique/Comment thread. Post here if you're wondering why he acts the way he does, if you have suggestions or comments about how he acts, etc. Comments will be unscreened to start and, if I can figure out how, IP logging will be turned off. Anonymous is, of course, allowed.

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It has been most fortuitous that I have spent the last several days confined within this cell, as I have been able to avoid the most recent curses. I do ask, however, about the status of my incarceration. I am not sure of how punishment works within the city, but in my own home world it was expected that an accused party would receive a just trial for their actions, and their sentence would be made known to them should they be found guilty.

As I have confessed my own involvement, such a trial is merely a formality, but a formality that I must insist upon.

If I am to be punished, I would know what my punishment is to be. If there is to be no trial, however, then I must ask to be released, that I may look after my business, and that the police protect me from any who feel that the judgment was to lenient.

Ms. Haruhi, I do hope that you have maintained the business in my absence and kept it from losing more money?

...I'm sorry. I won't do it again! Please don't send me to the cellar! It's dark there.

Mom? Dad? I'm really really sorry...?

[ooc: And Blitza is a kid, back when he used to work at the inn where he was basically manual labor, and not good manual labor at that. Oh, and subservient to...everyone.]

I request a conversation with a member of the Police Force.


I have...information...that is important to you.

[ooc: Scared of possible retribution from those that aren't in the force, Blitza thinks his best best at this point is to turn himself in. At least the Police probably won't kill him. DX.]

Alright, I am waiting for your man to come and pick up the supplies. Will his arrival to retreive your request be expeditious or shall I expect a delay?

[Marked to Employees, not Private]

You will be seeing several shipments of materials arriving to the shop, please sort them as normal. Erza, double your shifts, be on the look out for strange men, it is possible there will be attempts on the shop in the near future.
( Private to Haruhi )

It seems as though the city does not need Citysurance for leaving, but what about damage caused by those under the influence of a curse?

Perhaps you would like a guarantee that all such damages will be repaired and compensation be paid, rather then relying on our police force for such?

For a small fee each day, a few reds, your business or home can be insured, and all damage caused by cursed individuals will be repaid to you.

Due to my overwhelming capabilities and privileged intellect, I am a successful businessman within the city. I present to the city an opportunity to learn from my greatness, expanding their own businesses and potentially increasing their income exponentially. Should an individual in possession of a business need assistance with such, I am available to function as a consultant, for a small fee.

Fellow residents of of the City,

Do you live in fear that one day the City will pluck you from within it's borders and send you home, leaving those that depend upon you without the support that you provide? Do you worry what will happen to those you leave behind when you find the way home that you have been searching for?

Worry no more!

Airflyer Industries is now offering Citysurance. For a small weekly fee you can be assured that when you leave this city the monetary needs of those close to you will be met, helping to prevent them from falling into an economic debt while coping with their emotional pain.

[Individual rates are based off of time in city, past disappearances and amount of money desired to be provided to those left behind. Not all members of the city are eligible for Citysurance. Citysurance will be paid after one week of leaving the city to ensure there is no return.

See your local Airflyer representative for more details.]

Those that are interested can complete the following application:


Name:
Name(s) of Dependent(s):
Number of times you have left/returned to city:
Date of most recent arrival into city:

Ms. Haruhi, an individual should be contacting you soon regarding a potential business offer. Ensure that all the necessary paperwork is in order and contact me after he approaches you.

Excell, I must say that I am quite impressed with the roof. Consider your duties expanded to include building repair, your pay will be adjusted accordingly.

I have heard that Little Miss has gone missing? Mr. Miles, I believe missing people is something your organization specializes in?